Comments on: her reverse angelic http://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/ Sat, 10 Nov 2007 11:37:33 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: katy http://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-6 katy Mon, 14 Aug 2006 11:29:05 +0000 https://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-6 like danny i am sceptical of the poem's focus being a woman; perhaps only because that would be too easy. lovely imagery through and through, and like Rap's Daughter (great story by the way, one of my favorites!!) i enjoy the familiarity of the first line and the way i get tangled up in the preveribal sheets as each stanza twists and turns its way to an end. beautifully written too. like danny i am sceptical of the poem’s focus being a woman; perhaps only because that would be too easy.

lovely imagery through and through, and like Rap’s Daughter (great story by the way, one of my favorites!!) i enjoy the familiarity of the first line and the way i get tangled up in the preveribal sheets as each stanza twists and turns its way to an end.

beautifully written too.

]]> By: Danny http://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-5 Danny Mon, 14 Aug 2006 09:45:44 +0000 https://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-5 I am deciphering the imagery like a puzzle and I could only think of one, Tom, the holy bible. I am deciphering the imagery like a puzzle
and I could only think of one, Tom, the holy bible.

]]> By: Rappacinni's Daughter http://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-4 Rappacinni's Daughter Mon, 14 Aug 2006 02:06:22 +0000 https://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-4 this does have a divine lilt to it. i like that each stanza begins the same, grounded way and then spins off into an ethereal description. love "words like teeth to shoulders" ..."folded origami this way and that" i really do feel you sighing in her presence and the very last line...sends me utterly lovely this does have a divine lilt to it. i like that each stanza begins the same, grounded way and then spins off into an ethereal description.

love “words like teeth to shoulders” …”folded origami this way and that”

i really do feel you sighing in her presence

and the very last line…sends me

utterly lovely

]]> By: Ringing of the Bards VIII: Red / Green / Blue at Naked and Ashamed http://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-3 Ringing of the Bards VIII: Red / Green / Blue at Naked and Ashamed Sun, 13 Aug 2006 22:53:52 +0000 https://againstboredom.wordpress.com/2006/08/08/her-reverse-angelic/#comment-3 [...] Tom, who is fighting Against Boredom, is in love. He writes simple words in “her reverse angelic”, but manages to explain how [...] [...] Tom, who is fighting Against Boredom, is in love. He writes simple words in “her reverse angelic”, but manages to explain how [...]

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